The animation was good, very fluent, very clean and easy to follow.
I don't know what the craze is with Pokemon parodies these days but I sure am getting fed up of them. Feels unoriginal and takes away from any humour you had.
lol haha memes 4chan and stuff XDDD
yeah hi, I would like in the future for people to say why it's bad. not trying to be mean because it won't make I meaning so give me detail on why it is bad for furture videos keep this in mind thanks
Fuck me you don't see enough of this on Newgrounds any more.
Funny enough idea but the 2 frames that went into this distracted from the joke. Seemed lazy.
Love this. Love the old school vibe about it, the birds eye view and insane racing.
Was good for a laugh. To be fair the first minute or so really didn't do the quality of your animation justice. It seemed more like a sequence of freeze frames rather than a single animation. Was almost about to stop watching when I got to some more frame by frame and easier to follow animation.
You're good, and it's good you put the time in for a lengthy, well produced animation. There were points where the animation seemed a bit lazy, but all in all it was a decent watch.
Voice acting was okay, though the voices didn't really seem to match their characters at times, if that makes sense.
Any way, keep it up. Potential is with you.
ya the begining was mostly freeze frames but once i got into the groove of the animation i fleshed out the animations more. thanks for the ffedback btw much appreciated
Absolutely brilliant work on this. Seems to be the start of what could be a rather successful series. It was well animated, funny and easy to watch. I love that you didn't chop this into 2 minute episodes which a lot of people seem to do on here/youtube, so a good lengthy episode made for a decent watch.
The animation was fluent, fun, easy to follow and didn't seem lazy (which can happen if you're making an episode this long). Great art, pretty backgrounds and all in all a pretty professional finish to this.
The voice acting was good, but it seemed to lack energy at time, especially in a couple of parts where perhaps more enthusiasm would be needed, that's my only criticism.
I think you guys will do well here, keep up the great work. How this doesn't have a much higher rating is beyond me.
Thank you so much for your comment, we worked super hard on this and we can't wait to make more! We'll definitely work on punching up the energy in future eps.
But if you don't mind me asking where specifically do you think it could have used more energy in the voice acting? We're trying to find a balance in our delivery so we can make the dialogue sound more conversational and not too zany-- but then not too mundane/boring as well. I'd love to get more feedback from you on that.
I really liked this. The fact that it was ad-libbed in a single call is obvious, but it makes it funnier, more lifelike. The animation was fluid, really easy on the eyes, which is pretty important for these back and forth dialogue animations.
Enjoyed, keep it up.
Short and sweet. There's no need to make a joke last 2 minutes if it can be done in 20 seconds.
Very fluid animation, good detail to minor things (bird, etc). Just a fun animation to watch.
Hair looked a bit off, other than that, it was okay. Can't really give you a good review because test animations should go on the dumping grounds/animation forums rather than being submitted, but eh.
oh thats is an old animation... you a right, thanks for the comment
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