Markface's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragon Ball Stick Ep1]

Short.

First off, your animation was quite nice. Fluent and precise, it's something that I really enjoyed. The problem was that your sticks were so small that lack of detail was very obvious.

Work on your backgrounds, try and come up with a storyline better than "LET'S KILL HIM BECAUSE HE'S GOT ___" and make it a tad longer.

Cuboid11 responds:

heh .

[Breaking the chain]

Great!

I really enjoyed this one. Had a very... "Disney moral" feel to it. The music worked great and the animation was wonderful! Such a unique style you have there.

Everything worked well.

[The Chair Race]

Animations belong on Newgrounds.

Not stop motion animation. They only fall under Newgrounds stature if they are tasteful.

This wasn't, dull and filled with personal jokes nobody else would get.

[Culture Clubbing]

Nice references :P

The beginning? Amazing.

The humour was great and I absolutely loved the Hulk reference.

[Zombies - Short]

Not sure what happened there.

Hell, it was alright. You showed some potential with your frame by frame work and intense laziness with everything else.

Anyway, nice 30 second distraction.

[Blood Shot Madness 1]

Right.

Alright, a few tips.

First off, if you're attempting to make a creepy animation you need to work with your sound. Right now the music choice is alright but definitely needs to be isolated and increased at the right times.

Your characters look unrealistic with the way they handle weapons and the blood effects are bad. If you shoot someone in the head, animate the entry and exit wound.

Try harder.

ojo66 responds:

i think i tryed hard enough anything else i need to improve? O:

[Madness Tutorials: Guns]

Cute.

Well, at least you added some realism to it.

End in end you have to realise that Madness is such a basic concept though, and so is this.

FClock responds:

please read more about Madness in the Madness Wiki. Then come back and review. <.>

[Saunich der Hejhaug]

Rofl, brilliant.

This reminded me of something by Firth. The animation was great, the style of your art was well directed and suited this... worn out Sonic tribute well.

Great job, wonderful satire... top work.

['Royal Cheese']

God damnit I love this.

Love the sound effects you made. A fun little loop with nothing much you can approve on.

Great work.

[Mario visits Jump!! v0.3]

HAHAHAH HE VISITED A GAME HE ISN'T IN!

Use of sprites was horrible. The animation of said sprites was horrible. The storyline behind this (yes, something even some sprite users can make) was non-existent.

Try harder.

l33t-h4xor responds:

storyline will be in the next version.