Markface's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gnu confused]

Well look at that.

I quite liked this. Showed a sort of generic and repetitive notion to life.

Absolutely bizarre, but wonderful nonetheless.

[Mastermind 3]

Balls...

The pinnacle of humour for Newgrounds.

This was a good laugh and as per usual you homed in on a style that really represents the Mastermind series.

Great work.

[Kronos teh Amazing One]

Short.

Had some potential. The voice acting was bland, yet it worked well for this animation for reasons unknown to me.

Looks like your characters could use a little more expression, try using some more frame by frame to bring this out. It would be tough to do it with these characters but would really improve your animation.

Good work though.

[animation about anything?]

Song sucked.

Animation was all right. Some decent work with the frame by frame and character expression. Not much to comment on as this was quite the random piece.

pheef responds:

i didnt make the song....

:)

[Warhammer FB]

Ha, boobs.

Well this is pretty decent for your second go.

I suggest in the future you recreate your characters to better suit animation. You've drawn them in such a way that it would be very difficult to create fluent animation and because of that you've resulted to moving limbs in blocky rotations. I also noticed this with the book opening at the beginning.

Try more simple characters and incorporate some more frame by frame into your animation, it'll make it look much smoother.

The storyline was all right, needs a little work but I guess it's your own story.

Overall for your second animation this was good. Don't get me wrong it could use some work but these are things you'll pick up as you begin to animate more and more.

I expect good things from you! Best of luck!

Krzyek responds:

The characters aren't complicated. Maybe the limbs need to be redrawn. (already made new palms ) Next time I will motion tween to get more fluent animation.

[Things that Remind Me]

Some great art here.

Some bad animation... if there was any.

You have a great style, your colour variation worked wonderfully, it wasn't too rough or agressive but a sombre pallet that worked well with the beautiful choice of music.

I love your art but feel disappointed that it was wasted on something with such lack of animation.

I really hope to see more from you.

[16-Second Fury]

Some things to fix up.

First off, the text was irritating. You don't need to go over the top to make it look good, you can leave it plain and simple and in turn, easier to read.

The game made little sense, though that was probably intentional.

All the animation and art seemed a bit rushed, almost as if you were just cutting corners through it, stickmen, etc.

The game play was a little interesting but it lost my interest shortly after.

Izzy712 responds:

I fixed the text, yes, it was intentional that the movie was like this, and this was before I started using different layers for sound and animation, so that's why it's just stickmen. Thanks for the review, though :) I always appreciate the truth :3