Hmmm... hard to judge this.
Ok, first off. I really appreciate the effort you went into this with... it is a lot better than most of the anime junk that passes through the portal.
The visuals were GREAT but the animation was not. Don't get me wrong, the animation was good, but if you're using visuals of such high quality like the ones in your movie you need quality animation to match it. I know you've mentioned your series, but instead of spending time on a 60 minute piece with great visuals and decent animation... try making a shorter piece with amazing visuals and amazing animation... looking at your style I know you could do it oh so easily.
Your storyline is quite good though, especially in comparison to other anime series that get thrown on here. You've taken something that's a little more realistic, you've made the characters more unique.
On that note. Kill your voice actors. Sorry to say it but they really destroyed a lot of character development in this. With better voice actors you can have a more convincing and better set out list of characters.
Once again, thanks for putting in effort with this, the score you recieved does not match the one you should have received, so I'm giving you a 5 to try and boost it up.
Looking forward to the rest of the series.