Markface's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[aLiveJournal: 2007/07/13]

Nice style

First off, good luck with that Famecast thing... this is a fine animation and deserves a good spot in the competition.

The animation was nice, an edgy short on a topic rarely brushed on here at newgrounds to this calibar.

I'm quite confused by the low score though :S

[Awesome Compilation Vol 1]

Funny as hell!

Hands down Resident Awesome 4 was the best. Just a huge mix of hilarity, irony and funny-set ups.

Brilliant work as per usual, its great to see you'll be making more of these!

[Sonic Advance Crackups]

Decent.

Eh, the animation showed a nice mix of slapstick comedy which is hard to master on this site. But if you really want to hit big on the scores, try more intelligent humor...

[pad man]

Nice Style

This is a style that I'd like to see you improve on. I saw 2 real problems with this, the main being the annoying glitchiness of the paper flipping effect... you should just show it off to start up with and slowely transfigure towards a quick moving scene.

The second would be the lack of excitement in this, up until the end the animation lacked something decent.

The animation was nice, it was fluent at time and really showed some grounds for improvement... I like the style, but don't let this low score influence the way you animation... I think it should be ranked much higher.

[Luis Day Song]

Nice little song there Tom

Sure it's like a week late, but Happy Luis Day, Luis.

The animation was nice, a good peice of Newgrounds nostalgia.

[My Life]

Finish it up

For what it's at so far, it looks like it could display a nice moral image... which is something rare to see on newgrounds.

The visuals on this half were decent, but could use some working up, try invest into some more frame by frame animation.

For what it's at so far... it's quite nice.

[Zee Random Movie]

Slapstick comedy hardly works here

The visuals were barely above par, the comedy was near to aweful and the sounds lacked at time.

Something I can give you points for is the fluency of your animation. While the visuals lacked, the animation was still smooth, in a nice way.

Good work on that half.

TromboneClock responds:

Barely above par? Why don't you look at the crap people are submiting to this site and compare it to this. There was no need for comedy it's just supposed to be "Random". Visuals did not lack my friend either way your review score is way too low. From what you stated it sounds like you gave it a 6. A three is more like animation crap,visuals crap,etc.

[sketch skate]

Poor

The one major flaw behind this is the physics, your skater looks like he could jump in any direction he wants for aslong as he wants.

Work on the visuals, makes a more fluent animation and drop the imported Jpegs.

Try harder.

[The Court Of The Air]

Exciting

The build up of tempo music and pace in the animation really brought this to life. You used a nice mix of fluent animation and difficult angle's to really bring this animation out.

Great style, great animation.