Markface's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[StikZone]

Hectic.

The main problem with this was lack of detail. The fact that you have the same lines but with different colours to indicate what each object is got confusing, especially when you followed a non-linear path and glitchy animation.

I suggest you think of a plot, instead of having random crap going on, and work alot harder on your visuals if you want any hope of getting a score that isnt in the 1's.

DarkFlashMaster responds:

Im berly a 11 year old i tried my best

[Zee Random Movie]

Slapstick comedy hardly works here

The visuals were barely above par, the comedy was near to aweful and the sounds lacked at time.

Something I can give you points for is the fluency of your animation. While the visuals lacked, the animation was still smooth, in a nice way.

Good work on that half.

TromboneClock responds:

Barely above par? Why don't you look at the crap people are submiting to this site and compare it to this. There was no need for comedy it's just supposed to be "Random". Visuals did not lack my friend either way your review score is way too low. From what you stated it sounds like you gave it a 6. A three is more like animation crap,visuals crap,etc.

[Black&White fbf collab 3]

Good work.

Wow, Ronald... All of your collaberation works are just amazing... this is a fine example.

This collab was great, in my opinion the best in the series. Full of quick attacks and fluent animation. All of your work made this wonderful to watch.

Good job, I want to see more.

mr-womble responds:

thanks for the review, yeah, RonaldRaven is a very talented author :D

and yes, there is anyother one in the making :D glad you enjoyed this one.

[Newton's 3rd Law]

Nothing to do with physics

Well, that seemed ablsoutely pointless. It explained nothing about Newton's 3rd Law of Motion, except it showed a poor understanding to projectile motion and forces. If you got an A+ for that, either you're lying or your teacher is very lenient.

Now, onto the animation. Poorly made, surrounded by a vast collection of imported Jpeg's and uploaded SFX's. To top this all up, it was followed up by poor frame by frame work and simple tweening.

Now I'm aware this was for a school project, but you cannot use that in your defence. This is a website for animations and not a 5 minute job showing little work into science.

Try harder.

DaEnglishWeiner responds:

no shit shirlock, and yes it does deal with science. either u failed science and dont know newtons laws, or your just plain retarded.

im not gonna spend 17 hours working on a fricken school project, ok douchebag?

so shut up fucktard

[An Animusical Minute Ep 3]

I love these shorts

Each one of them is just as fun as the last. You pick the music and really display it visually to its full potential. Great animation!

Foreverland responds:

Thank you!!!

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 2]

Great laugh

I've seen some of your previous work and the reason why I like it all is because you have such a unique style of comedy which I get.

Anyway, while this was short, it was a great laugh. Good job!

Jimtopia responds:

Thanks man, I'm glad I made ya laugh.

[PicoDay: PathwayThroughNG]

I loved it

C&U, There She Is, Bad Guys! Christ you guys did alot.

First and foremost I need to add that whoever did the badguy voices pulled them off well!

Anyway, the animation was great. Usually this style of animation gets dragged on to long and just gets boring, but you guys pulled it off with flare. It was brilliant.

From visuals to sound to the fun length of the animation, it showed all the hard work you put in. Great job!

calcoA responds:

All voices other than X-Men and Weebl and Bob were done by their original voice actors.

It's in the credits also, if you were wondering.

[Clayland - Pico 2]

Great laugh

This will go down as one of the funny animations. Anyway, great clay work here.

The animation was quite fluent which is something most claymations lack, along with this there was some decent detail put into your models which paid off.

Overall, good work... I also enjoyed the voice acting, very monotone.

TechFlash responds:

heh, thanks dude! Wow, it surprises me to see tons of people online at midnight!

[pico's fan]

Decent

Ok this animation was a bit mixed in my mind. You exceeded in some things and didn't do so well in others.

First, your animation was great. You set out your visuals well, went for some daring shots and it paid off. The animation was fluent at times and you had a nice mix of movement and still shots.

Though what really pissed me off was the music, it was great at the start, then it cut out. I'm sure you're going to hear this 1,000 times throughout all the reviews... but if you kept it going im sure you would of gotten a higher score.

The storyline was good, for once it wasn't Pico grabbing a gun and going nuts on the unsuspecting public, it was a new twist to the movie, along with some laughs.

Anyway, great plot... great visuals, great animation. You just need to fix that sound.

Sharples responds:

how, how, how do i fix that sound? any suggestions? and by the way, is the pre-loader working for you?