Markface's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Whiny the pooh]

It felt... cliche.

I mean, Winnie the Pooh going ape shit for honey? Treating it like it's heroin itself? This sort of joke has been overdone. Besides the original joke itself you didn't really build anything else, just him sitting around for a bit bitching for a little bit.

I understand the animation is suppose to be short but you could of at least put a little more effort into the script itself.

The visuals were nice, the animation was basic but that's all that's really required for a yellow bear sitting around. The voice acting was spot on mind you.

Finally, I'm not sure you need 20 second long credits for an animation that lasts close to that long.

Emanhattan responds:

something about the last part of your review made me laugh

[The ABC Song]

The animation had little to do with the song.

Just a fancy way of showing the alphabet. You could of been more creative when it came to showing off the letters.

Kitzah responds:

Honestly, how many music videos really do have anything to do with the song they are for?

[Carrotoid (0m:18s)]

what.

Well the ending was so lame that I laughed.

Pixelation in this was nice, but I have to ask. Was the carrot high?

Surn responds:

No. Perhaps a tad exuberant- but not high.

[Where the Missing Sock Go]

Ah... so that's what happens.

Well, this makes total sense now.
what.

Anyway, the animation was fun. A great silent adventure. The frame by frame work was good, a tad choppy at bits but otherwise good.

Great work though!

OxSox responds:

Thanks for the review! I basically agree with you on the fbf. It was a big thing I was working on in the animation and I think doing the movie helped me improve my style. Not to pad myself on the back or anything but I thought I really nailed the ogre swinging the club though, I think that may be my best fbf to date.

[New Jack Chase]

That was different.

Psychedelic, colourful, interesting. A quirky acid trip in a sense.

The abrupt ending was cute too. All in all a nice short.

Fawx responds:

hey there

[RvB Fightnight]

Dull.

Oh c'mon. This has all been done before, hasn't it?

If you want to level yourself higher than all the other "Kill him for no reason" stick animations then try spending a little more time on it.

Physics were off. Storyline was nonexistant. Overall it was generic.

Goeliath responds:

i completely agree. IT was one of my first animations though, and i was just getting used to drawing everything. No i will not spend more time on stick animations, i have moved beyond those.
However, a lot of NG flashes don't really have a storyline, or stick fights to be exact, but what the hell. But for one of my very first flashes u have to admit i did good for a beginner. good, not great

[Dope The Board Game]

OMG A WEED JOKE LOL.

... no.

Anyway. You didn't animate or draw a thing here. Just stuck your voice and played a bunch of pictures. This sort of things belongs on YouTube. Not an animation website.

Moscardino0 responds:

well...it was made in macromedia so STFU, it isn't as funny if it is made as an animation so the picture style will stay

[Fancy Donkey Tea Party]

Holy shit...

I gotta get me an invite to one of these parties.

obesefeline responds:

Dress conservatively

[Dragon Ball Stick Ep1]

Short.

First off, your animation was quite nice. Fluent and precise, it's something that I really enjoyed. The problem was that your sticks were so small that lack of detail was very obvious.

Work on your backgrounds, try and come up with a storyline better than "LET'S KILL HIM BECAUSE HE'S GOT ___" and make it a tad longer.

Cuboid11 responds:

heh .

[Blood Shot Madness 1]

Right.

Alright, a few tips.

First off, if you're attempting to make a creepy animation you need to work with your sound. Right now the music choice is alright but definitely needs to be isolated and increased at the right times.

Your characters look unrealistic with the way they handle weapons and the blood effects are bad. If you shoot someone in the head, animate the entry and exit wound.

Try harder.

ojo66 responds:

i think i tryed hard enough anything else i need to improve? O: