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[Madness Tutorials: Guns]

Cute.

Well, at least you added some realism to it.

End in end you have to realise that Madness is such a basic concept though, and so is this.

FClock responds:

please read more about Madness in the Madness Wiki. Then come back and review. <.>

[Mario visits Jump!! v0.3]

HAHAHAH HE VISITED A GAME HE ISN'T IN!

Use of sprites was horrible. The animation of said sprites was horrible. The storyline behind this (yes, something even some sprite users can make) was non-existent.

Try harder.

l33t-h4xor responds:

storyline will be in the next version.

[verbal diarrhea]

Stomach disturbance.

I enjoyed how utterly bizarre and bland this was.

Could of used a little more animation though.

FlashBulb responds:

More color, check!

[Megaman Vs Firman Lvl 5]

4chan references ruined it.

Though I did enjoy the obvious parody feel to it.

A nice little animation to watch, not much I can say about it as I have no idea what went on.

HoboNeko responds:

There are no 4chan references.

[NG, learn how to vote!]

Nice.

This was made up well. Your voice didn't really suit the wacky style that went with the animation but it worked all right.

Good work, couldn't of put it any better myself.

HolyKonni responds:

Oh my, thank you!

[The Lamp]

The fuck?

Well, that was different.

What I hated about this was the lack of frame by frame work. You just tweened or slid a bunch of pictures across the scene except for the end.

Felt blocky and irritating.

Aigis responds:

Would it help if I told you that this animation was an exercise in creating a flash in twenty minutes without erasing anything?

[Naraku & Dracula #1]

what.

Not sure what happened in that 12 seconds of confusion.

You need a start button and more movement between your characters. You used sprites, why did you have to make them stand around and do nothing?

eNVy-Entertainment responds:

Thanks for the advice on the start button :)
As far as them standing around, we just wanted to focus on the dialogue for our first cartoon. We'll add more movement in the next one.

[animation about anything?]

Song sucked.

Animation was all right. Some decent work with the frame by frame and character expression. Not much to comment on as this was quite the random piece.

pheef responds:

i didnt make the song....

:)

[Warhammer FB]

Ha, boobs.

Well this is pretty decent for your second go.

I suggest in the future you recreate your characters to better suit animation. You've drawn them in such a way that it would be very difficult to create fluent animation and because of that you've resulted to moving limbs in blocky rotations. I also noticed this with the book opening at the beginning.

Try more simple characters and incorporate some more frame by frame into your animation, it'll make it look much smoother.

The storyline was all right, needs a little work but I guess it's your own story.

Overall for your second animation this was good. Don't get me wrong it could use some work but these are things you'll pick up as you begin to animate more and more.

I expect good things from you! Best of luck!

Krzyek responds:

The characters aren't complicated. Maybe the limbs need to be redrawn. (already made new palms ) Next time I will motion tween to get more fluent animation.