Some things to fix up.
First off, the text was irritating. You don't need to go over the top to make it look good, you can leave it plain and simple and in turn, easier to read.
The game made little sense, though that was probably intentional.
All the animation and art seemed a bit rushed, almost as if you were just cutting corners through it, stickmen, etc.
The game play was a little interesting but it lost my interest shortly after.
I fixed the text, yes, it was intentional that the movie was like this, and this was before I started using different layers for sound and animation, so that's why it's just stickmen. Thanks for the review, though :) I always appreciate the truth :3
what.
Yeah, you did get lazy. This was simply a bunch of circles prancing about to audio you didn't even create. If you're going to back an animation with horrible visuals simply because it's content is funny then MAKE THE AUDIO YOURSELF.
I also laughed when you asked people to vote 5.
Try harder.
Fine then. Thanks for the review.
*Edit*
Super Mario Hyadain didn't use audio made by the guy who made it. You like that, don't you?
Bizarre.
Absolutely brilliant.
I'd personally compare this to the feel of secretly wanting to be a 16 year old, attractive girl so I can pick up younger guys to piss off their girlfriends and suck them off, taking their loads in my mouth simply because I've always wanted to try it.
So good work.
wow, that... freaked me out.
You just gave me a taste of my own medicine, no pun intended :3
Eh.
The shape tweens annoyed me.
2 points for some ok frame by frame.
Same, but it was the first time I used tweens in a flash. I'm pretty surprised it wasn't blammed.
Fighting for no reason?
Hardly entertaining. It's been done so many times before.
Animation was slow and unrealistic... and did some guy die from having a bucket on his head?
I only just started animating and that is the reason I only used stick men.
you thought this movie was a bit of a punch in the pants so I'll start working on my drawing.
(yes somone did die with a bucket on der head)
Righteo.
Guess I can't really judge this as it was done for a mate. The music was good but from an outsiders point of view made no sense.
Probably just an inside joke.
Yeah... it was a present for him. ^^; wasnt really meant to please the public eye. thanks for the review, tho!
what
That was far too short and had no substance. Stick figures fighting for no reason has been done so many times it's beyond dull.
You showed some skill with your frame by frame work but you really need to skip being lazy and work on the finer detail.
Good luck with future work.
thanks for the constructive criticism.
I really enjoy doing fbf work, and doing more serious/detailed animations is much more difficult while doing fbf. Thats my reason for stick figures.
I hope you'll be glad to hear in my next one, Red and White, there are multiple scenes, ambient sounds, and props!
It was alright.
The dull inuendo ruined it for me. The slow walking speed irritated me.
But that nostalgic feel of pokemon revived it. Nice work.
Dull innuendo? You'll have to be more specific. Making him walk faster would look unnatural. Thanks for the review anywaysss.
Oh god... lol.
I can tell you also spend too much time watching house of representatives... the detail on the figures were amazing. Great work!
well i DID have to do some research, but i couldn't force myself to watch too much of it. i went to the streaming page, took some screenshots and got the hell out of there
Wonderful!
Oh hell, only 2 days? Jesus christ Adam.
A wonderfully fluent, lively and well brought out animation. I just loved the expression of the kid.
Keep it up!
thanks :D
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