Some things to fix up.
First off, the text was irritating. You don't need to go over the top to make it look good, you can leave it plain and simple and in turn, easier to read.
The game made little sense, though that was probably intentional.
All the animation and art seemed a bit rushed, almost as if you were just cutting corners through it, stickmen, etc.
The game play was a little interesting but it lost my interest shortly after.